Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Compare/Contrast

A Venn diagram is a tool that helps you compare and contrast things. In the diagram below, a dog and a cat are compared and contrasted. 

Dog
Both Animals
Cat
Range from very small to very large
Wide variety of breeds
Bark
Eat dog food
Can be trained
May be pets
Usually have fur
Need proper care
Generally the same small size
Only a few breeds
Meow
Eat cat food
Difficult to train

The same can be done for characters in a book.

The Wine of Astonishment by Earl Lovelace

Ivan Morton
Both Characters
Bolo
Schoolteacher/politician

Moves to a big house on the hill

Rich


(Kind of) community leaders

Date Eulalie

In a position to help the problem with the church
Stickfighter

Lives in the village

Poor


Practice:

To practice using a Venn diagram, compare and contrast the Gerbie and the Furbie. Record how each is different. Then, write what is the same about them. 

Gerbie
Both Items
Furbie













Once you organize ideas in a Venn diagram, you can more easily write about those ideas. When writers write to compare, they must present information in a way that makes sense to readers.
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There are two ways to organize a written comparison. One way is to talk first about one object, then about the other. This is called a whole-to-whole comparison. In this whole-to-whole comparison, information about an orange is in regular type. Information about a lemon is in italics.


            This orange has a slightly bumpy, orange skin. When I peel the rind off, I can easily pull apart the sections. The taste is sweet. The lemon also has a slightly bumpy skin, but it is yellow. Inside, the sections are not quite so easy to pull apart. It is the sourest thing I have ever put in my mouth.


If you were doing this in a longer essay, you might consider having one paragraph about oranges and one paragraph about lemons.

The other way is to talk first about one feature, or characteristic, as it relates to both objects. Then, go on to another feature, and so on. This is a part-to-part comparison. Here is an example. Again, information about an orange is in regular type; information about a lemon is in italics.

           
This orange has a slightly bumpy, orange skin. The lemon also has a slightly bumpy skin, but it is yellow. When I peel the orange’s rind off, I can easily pull apart the sections. Inside the lemon, the sections are not quite so easy to pull apart. The taste of the orange is sweet. The lemon is the sourest thing I have ever put in my mouth.


Now, look back at the details you recorded about the Gerbie and the Furbie in your Venn diagram. Write a paragraph in which you compare and contrast the two items. Decide which method of organization you will use: whole-to-whole or part-to-part. Then, write the paragraph.

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